Hi Carly, Honestly, I'm not stalking you. Your poem was posted I Write just before mine. So here I am again, but this time in more familiar territory for me, I'm reviewing your Specters Rise.

First impression, all I needed was the photo. Who wouldn't read on?

The neat quatrains made up of rhymed couplets almost seem to want to hang on to some kind of control amid the chaos of the dream. I loved the cross rhyme in the first stanza. The meter is even and rhythmic, no stumbling here unless it is in an attempt to escape the darkness. The repetition of Specters to begin each stanza gave the poem an inescapable feel, like they just keep coming.

I loved the spooky darkness of this poem. Nice writing.

~~Tink



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