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Pretty Ugly Words  [18+]
Poetry and prose for contests. The occasional "slider" poem.
by IceSkatingSugarCube
Review of Pretty Ugly Words  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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Curious as to what the slider tool is. Here in Florida the change of summer to fall is much more subtle. October is my birth month and favorite. Also first and second marriages in October--and inexplicably First Holy Communion. I find the last lines confusing, flu ills, summer kills? Summer kills flu ills or flu kills? Blessings.
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