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I Write In 2019   [13+]
Lots of creative pursuits in 2019.
by 💙 Carly
         Review for entry/chapter: "Specters Rise
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, 💙 Carly
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. This is my bonus review for the merit badge challenge.

*FlowerP*My Impression*FlowerP*
I love this time of year because of all the spectacular creepy writings to be found around here. This poem does not disappoint, and I love that you included the prompt picture, it really adds to the creepiness of the piece.

There is an easy flow and rhythm as well as a lovely bit of rhyme that makes this a fabulous poem. Nicely done and good luck in the Dark Dreamscapes contest!


*FlowerP*Suggestions*FlowerP*
No suggestions from me.

*FlowerP*Grammar/Punctuation/Usage*FlowerP*
I didn't notice anything here.

*FlowerP*Rating Explanation*FlowerP*
This is a 5 for sure. I love the almost circular quality of this poem, that the specters can only be around at nighttime, but the ending of "'tis not long before they return," brings us back to the beginning. Splendid!

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