It's been a pleasure to review your story "On Butterfly Wings "  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I appreciate the philosophical thoughts and the emotions portrayed in this poem.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind.

I like the lines “When two loving hearts collide
Honoring equality in all things
With mutual respect and care
They'll soar on butterfly wings ”.

I like the thoughts evokes in this poem. It reflects the thoughts of all of us. This poem tells us to embrace life fully. The last second stanza is my favorite.

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.