It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,

I like this story, and how you contrast the worlds with the prompt Promise you won't tell anyone. It's interesting to think about. But what I like most about this is the dialogs. They flowed beautifully with your crafted words. You caught the story so beautifully.

Mina.