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Review #4510946
Viewing a review of:
Wheel of Fortune  [18+]
My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier
         Review for entry/chapter: "October 21, 2019
Review of Wheel of Fortune  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A boo-ghost for reviewing.

Greetings, ridinghhood-p.boutilier ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019. *Smile* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Bursto**Ghost**Bursto*

*Ghost* Boo-boos*Wind*
         *Tack* Could not scare up anything! Everything looks amazing. *Smile*

*Ghost* Goodies *Jackolantern*
         *Candy6* You used the prompt word--glitch--without it feeling forced. Sometimes those prompt words feel awkward, as if they don't belong, but your piece works very well! Nice work!
         *Candy5* I read this over and over, not because I needed to for clarity, but because I liked what it had to say. There's so much truth in those brief, twenty-four syllables and everyone should read them! This could be a quote on a poster, it's that good.

*Ghost* Chillin' & Thrillin'*Moon*
         *Wolf* My favorite line...
                             Pick a flight path.

*Burstv**Ghost**Burstv*
Excellent! And best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

*Cat* Have a great day and...*Cat2*
*Jackolantern*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Jackolantern*


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