Hi there, I have found you're item page on the Read & Review section. I will be reviewing it and I will give you my best positive answer as I can. I'll be honest about it as well.


Characters - When I was reading your poem, I pictured two people breaking up because of personal issues. I understand and when someone hurts you in a way that is not forgivable, I've gone through that. Throughout my life, I've been told my love life is a disaster but everything about me is great. So I can relate to the poem.

Rhyme Together - The poem went together great and It was a pleasure to read so I did enjoy it. I placed myself I once was when I was with my son's father. It was hard to let him go but I had too.

Setting/Scene: I picture this being at home.


Dialogue: I think you did good with the dialogue.


My overall answer: Well, I have to say, Keep on writing and never give up.


Suggestions, if any: NONE

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