This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a good piece of write and yet so informative. The image that comes to my mind is the effects of war. You paint beautifully a perfect scene of war . It’s sad that human don’t think what will happen to our new generation. It seems you wrote these from personal views and experience and it looks great. It expressed the feeling, rights, and change etc.
Keep Writing!!
Mina
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