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Given: Oct 24, 2019 at 10:46am
Length: 1,580 Characters |
1,140 w/o WritingML
Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
Oh, what a lovely, lovely piece!
Goodies transport me… I love this!
and your brother shouting What's up, Doc? instead of "Trick or Treat." What a cool memory! Thank you for sharing that. memories merge into a collage of scents and sounds… this is so beautiful, Neva! You have a gift for words, clearly.
Boo-boos
Just one little nit-picky thing... my Grandparents' house. --> my grandparents' house. Not a big deal, hardly worth mentioning.
Chillin' & Thrillin'
This reminds me of something that should be in one of those Ideal magazines (do they still publish those?) I remember my grandma had some, one with a fall theme filled with poetry, etc. and also the Christmas edition. This piece would certainly be perfect for such a publication!
Excellent!
Have a great day and...
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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