Hi there, my friend,

Well, I read your poem and I find that so powerful to read. I almost had tears just reading that because my grandfather fought in WW2 and my mom's boyfriend fought in Vietnam so I may not know what you went through when you went to war in Vietnam but I do thank you for your Service and the sacrifice your family made. You have a good heart and I hope you will tell your true story what you went through in your life.

The poem was perfect so I don't see nothing wrong with the words or any punctuations. The dialogue was great for this poem.

Thank you for sharing
Stacie

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