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Hello! I found your story on at Read & Review. I'm with the WDC Angel Army. I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful. *Cool*


*Tackb* - Overall Impression:
I like the poem and I did enjoyed reading it. you did a good job on this poem.


*Tack* - Hook:
It hooked me the first word as I was reading the poem.


*Tackb* - Style and Voice:
I think you got style and it fits you as I read the poem.


*Tack* - Scene/Setting:
I can picture it with the American Flag with Red, Blue and White. We are the land of the free and the home of the brave.


*Tackb* - Characters:
None


*Tack* - Dialogue:
You did great with the dialogue.


*Tackb* - Grammar and Mechanics:
There are no errors to correct.


*Tack* - Suggestions:
The only suggestion I would give you, Keep on writing and I do enjoy reading your stories and poems.



Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!


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