Hi there,
I want to say, I went through the similar situation except I knew this man for 19 years and it's hard to lose him and he is someone that I knew. It seems to me that you knew this man who would play the guitar on the corner of your street.

I will say this, you did a good job but you have to put comma and period.

I did enjoyed reading your poem.

Suggestion: Keep on writing.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .