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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

Beautifully written and told the earliest memories of childhood. The readers could imagine the scene where they were.

The narrator could remember a apartment in Salt Lake City, Utah where she passed her days with her siblings. She remembers the game monster that she used to play with her siblings. The narrator expressed her poignant and brief feeling in each paragraph, each memory of her early days made her nostalgic.

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