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 Your Eyes are my Favourite Colour  [E]
Short poem
by Hana
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Your Eyes are my Favourite Colour"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “If you could see how it feels when you dive into deep and you're so light and the water's so blue, you just want to get lost in it” . I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.

*BulbO* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*BulbP* SUGGESTIONS:I feel that the sixth line of your poem is a little longer. I like the repeated line “That's what colour it would be”

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

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