Hi there,
I found your poem by going to Browse By Genre and go to poetry, that's how I found it. I hope you will find this Feedback helpful.
I like the way the poem is and it made sense that you were talking about sheep and their shepherds. I can picture the sheep on a hill and they have a Border Collie by their side to go get the sheep from the hill and bring them back to home. I understand and I read in between the lines what the poem states, that's if you're talking about that. I can be wrong too. Either way, I did picture that happening. I do have a border collie so that's why it made me think about that.

You did a great job on this poem. Keep on Writing.

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