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Given: Oct 28, 2019 at 4:30pm
Length: 383 Characters |
383 w/o WritingML
I enjoyed this piece very much. Your characters are distinct and each has a unique voice. I can see Emily's concern and worry for Arlynn and her dislike of Lance clearly. Though Lance doesn't actually appear, his presence is clearly felt with in the context of the story, based on the reactions of the two characters who appears. I'm curious to see where the story will go from here.
You responded to this review 10/28/2019 @ 5:26pm EDT
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