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Pretty Ugly Words  [18+]
Poetry and prose for contests. The occasional "slider" poem.
by IceSkatingSugarCube
         Review for entry/chapter: "Summer's End--Tanka" 
Review of Pretty Ugly Words  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A boo-ghost for reviewing.

Greetings, IceSkatingSugarCube ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . *Smile* This is an extra review and I have chosen your piece.

*Monster1* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Bursto**Ghost**Bursto*
This definitely brought back memories of school! And on both sides--the kid's and the school employee! *Smile*

*Ghost* Boo-boos*Wind*
         *Tack* Could not scare up a thing!

*Ghost* Goodies *Jackolantern*
         *Candy6* Oh, those stiff new shoes! I remember the blisters. *Bigsmile*
         *Candy5* I always loved the new clothes part of starting school. *Wink*
         *Candy8* As an adult, I worked in the school system for 12 years, and that coffee was a must! *CoffeeO*
         *Candy7* You followed the poetry form nicely! *Checko*

*Ghost* Chillin' & Thrillin'*Moon*
         *Wolf* friends reunited again
                   *Wolf* I did love school, but it slowly turned into more of a social thing for me as I grew into my teens. *Bigsmile*

*Burstv**Ghost**Burstv*
It seems you pretty much covered the beginning of the school year in this piece. Great job!

*Cat* Have a great day and...*Cat2*
*Jackolantern*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Jackolantern*

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