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 Life is Like a Jigsaw Puzzle  [E]
A short poem I wrote in elementary school.
by Shaved_Space_Monkey
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, Shaved_Space_Monkey!
Wow! That's some handle! I like it, though!
For such a short piece, this does say a lot. Life can indeed be compared to a jigsaw puzzle, and it's up to us figure out where all the pieces go. The only problem is we have no idea what the picture of the puzzle is going to look like, so we have to envision that picture in our heads while put the pieces to together.
Whoah! Did I just write that? That's pretty good. I might have to copyright that! *Laugh*
Seriously though, I agree that we need get off our butts and start getting to work, or as I'd like to say, making something of our lives. And since I'm twice your age, let tell that time will go by faster than you know, so make every minute count!
I only wish I'd taken my writing more seriously when I was your age. It took me 50 damn years to figure out what I wanted to be when I grew up, and now it's probably too late!
Anyway, sorry to make your eyeballs bleed by having to read this. But there's one last thing I want to say: I read your port intro and your bio, and don't let those 'problems' hold you back! I can tell you've got a good head on your shoulders, and I want you to make the most of your life!
And I know you CAN!
Kee ponw ritin gon, SSM, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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