My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "All Hallows Eve" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fourth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because the Goblin was sure no one knew his secret and that was exactly the way he liked it, feeling confident his little trick would work.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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