Hello, Tinker
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. I have chosen this poem as my bonus review for the merit badge challenge.

My Impression
What a scary situation! I have only been in a similar boat once, years ago and it was not nearly to this extreme. Being that close to a wildfire is a terrifying thing. I pray for all those in California affected by this monstrosity. I hope that you continue to be safe. I like that this poem takes on a light and playful tone, as though the fire itself is a childlike prankster. This contrasts nicely with the seriousness of the reality of the fires. I appreciated the author's note at the end and felt that it gave a much deeper insight into the poem itself. Nicely done!

Suggestions
No suggestions. It all looks good to me.

Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
I didn't notice anything here.

Rating Explanation
This is a 5 for sure. Again, stay safe and God bless!

IceSkating SugarCube

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