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 Being ORDINARY  [E]
These days, being ordinary is not an ordinary task. It takes more to be.
by tales of 6502
Review of Being ORDINARY  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi there, Tales!
This isn’t bad for one of your 1st pieces on here, and I think that byline say a lot about this. I took it to mean that in a sense, extraordinary people are just ordinary people anymore. But if you didn’t mean it that way, there’s absolutely nothing wrong with being ordinary.
People who think they’re extraordinary spend their lives missing the simple and most important things in life, just as you mentioned in the last lines of your stanzas. Which ironically is in complete and perfect contrast t0 the two lines that precede them!
A perfect example of this is the 2nd stanza.
There were a few lines that felt awkward (odd wording), but you definitely got your point across.
Nice job, Tales!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you’re going to love it here!
By the way, I noticed you don’t have any Merit Badges yet. Click on My Account (on the left hand side) > Achievements, and then go back and check your email. You should have a nice little surprise (or 2 or 3) waiting for you there! *Bigsmile* You only need to do this when you’ve reached certain ‘achievements’.
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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