My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"A Milky Way Wonder" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!! Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

I really enjoyed this poem of yours... I use to go out and lay on a blanket in the grass and watch the stars at night and even on a cloudy night, I would see what the clouds would show me lol. But I can no longer lay in the grass to watch the stars and the clouds because of my disability and not being able to get up off the floor/ground by myself anymore lol. Even though I cannot do it that way anymore I can always do these things while sitting in a chair outside lol. It may not be as fun but it's doable.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to accomplish. Sorry, I am late on doing this I just lost one of my dogs this week.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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