My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I am sorry I am not really familiar with non-rhyming poetry, but I will try my best with this review ok. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful! I like you "I Am Free" poem even though it does not rhyme like I am used too. I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems. I like the last stanza where you say "I Am Free" Keep Writing!!! PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to accomplish. Sorry, I am late on doing this I just lost one of my dogs this week. Many Blessings, Sharmelle My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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