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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a good poem. It's inspiring and motivating. I like the thoughts woven in this poem. This well crafted write delivers a powerful message especially the last lines
“We dwell in a globular ball, merely a massive hall.
United we stand, divided we all fall."

It’s really true that the peace is within us. For that we need unity. It is important to work together to achieve a bigger goal. It’s sad that human don’t think what will happen to our future. The tone I find this poem is positive. The rhyming is beautiful. Keep writing more !!!

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