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Review #4514455
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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ Truth or Consequences ~" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, ruwth ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . *Smile* This is actually an extra review, too, and I decided to choose this piece. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Squirrel* Aw, nuts! *Squirrel*
         *Acorn* possibilites in the 2nd paragraph should be possibilities.
         *Acorn* Just something to consider, the word wise could also be wiser. I'm sure it's just a preference either way, so I thought I would humbly mention it. *Smile*

*Fox* Goodies *Fox*
         *Cookie* This is a great 75-word item! I had no difficulty whatsoever reading and understanding the storyline. Nice work!
         *Cookie* I've often had these same thoughts as your character and like her, chose the belief option.
         *Cookie* Great piece!


*Owl* Things to Hoot About! *Owl*
         She thought about the possibilites.
         I liked this because I could feel the pause... the thoughts she considered. *Thumbsup*

*Leafbr* Have a great day and...*Leafbr*
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*

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