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 To my pains surrender  [E]
Surrendering to pains upcoming in life is what I've wrote my poem about
by annakerrtate2019
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "To my pains surrender"  from read and review page on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good poem. I like the way you put your feelings out. I like the thoughts woven in this poem. It’s really true that poetry help us express how we feel by writing a poem from deep down within the heart and mind. But I think inner peace is within us. The rhyming is beautiful. I like the lines

"I've been broken down in pieces
My hearts been ripped in two.
I've tried to regain composure
But I just couldn't see It through."

Keep writing more !!!

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