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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression : This is a sweet poem beautifully started with a line“I loved you madly,crazily,you are like my every day of morning sunshine,”. I like the way the poet put her hearts deepest feelings.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: It wrote with perfect emotion that gives the readers a good feeling when they read it. The red fonts are appropriate. The last lines express the desires of the poets. “and yes its like god has cursed me & I will die ,I promise my love.”

It's pleasure to know someone like you. Keep writing more!!!


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