First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a beautiful nature poems. You have captured the natures unique moments so beautifully. I appreciate the thoughts woven in this poem. Yes, Beautiful nature could cherish our heart always.
TITLE: The title fits your poem.
IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “Orange is the dusk
Before they start to shine
Opening the night
A magnificent design”.
RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.
OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poems. It’s well written.
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