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Review of Seashore Proposal  
Review by ruwth
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


"I Write in 2019"  has me reviewing your item as an extra review! *Wink*

Your poem is beautiful!

7/7/7/5 syllables of perfection.

Your title doesn't do it justice.

I find the poem breath-taking. I am sure you could come up with a breath-taking title to go with it.

Your current title "Seashore Proposal" is too dry and plain. I guess also it is telling versus showing. Not sure the idea of showing is usually applied to a title but maybe in this case it should be.

I have no suggested titles to offer but am sure you could come up with something magical.

Your poem is definitely magical! ♡



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