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Review by Mastiff
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello,

I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it.

*Vignette5*First impression:
Well, I have to say, I had no idea where this was going. The title helped me get there, but it wasn't exactly where I thought we were going to end up!

*Vignette5*Things That Might Make It Better:
I think, if you could have fit it in, Sal giving a silent scream at the end could have been a nice touch.

*Vignette5*Mechanics:

Para. 1 Ln. 1 - "Sal's" is what you want there.

Overall - That's all I saw! *Smile*

*Vignette5*Things I Like:
Wow! That really was some dark stuff! I like that kind of thing...

*Vignette5*Adherence to Contest Rules:
Word counter says... 75! Looks like you followed them all.

*Vignette5* Overall Opinion
I thought it was very cool. Flipping the script on the humans who dissect frogs. A very unique tale.

Mastiff *Dog2*

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