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My 24 Syllable Notebook  [13+]
A place to hide my feeble attempts of counting syllables.
by Lilith of House Martell
         Review for entry/chapter: "Encouragement" 
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Greetings, Lilith of House Martell ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Squirrel* Aw, nuts! *Squirrel*
         *Acorn* Just one picky thing for you to consider: I would uncap the P in the last line to be consistent with the other lines, other than the first. *Smile* But that's up to you, of course. *Wink*

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         *Gingerbread* I loved this!
         *Gingerbread* I could feel his arms around me amidst the turmoil! Yes, and I also felt that tiny bit of comfort. Wow. Great job, Lilli! I absolutely love this! I have felt like this so could really connect to it.
         *Gingerbread* Great use of the prompted word!
         *Gingerbread* And exactly 24 syllables. *Smile*

*Owl* Things to Hoot About! *Owl*
         amidst the turmoil
         This line really stood out to me. Nice choice of words! Nice work.

*Leafbr* Have a great day and...*Leafbr*
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*

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