Hi Rolly,
These are fantastic lyrics. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The lyrics are about the questionable choices made by Willie Nelson and how you think his life will end because of them. I don't know much about Willie Nelson except that he advocated legalizing marijuana use. I loved these lyrics and read to the last word. The free verse works well in these lyrics, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The lyrics flow extremely well. They are a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in these lyrics. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.