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 FIRST MEETING  [13+]
Whoops! Sherry mistakenly appears at the wrong meeting. Flash Fiction winner!
by SandraLynn Team Florent!
Review of FIRST MEETING  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, SandraLynn!
I like this! And it wouldn't surprise me if something like this really happened!
For a FF piece, you did a great job of telling us about Sherry's honest mistake, and the imagery was perfect. I can just see her sitting there and pulling out that cupcake from her purse, only to be quickly 'overtaken' and escorted out of the classroom by those two 'very large women'! *Laugh*
I also liked your descriptions of the desks! That brought back a lot of memories, both good and bad! *Laugh*
Great job, SandraLynn!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for the chuckles, and have a wonderful weekend!

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