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Given: Nov 24, 2019 at 8:17am
Length: 583 Characters |
578 w/o WritingML
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!
"love is complex" is a great poem and has a great rhythm.
I found one distraction and I do not know if I am just missing something with it or something that you would like to change. Inline nine in the first stanza did you mean to put "it's" not "it"? Please forgive me if I am wrong on this and I am miss-understanding that part ok.
Other than that this is a great poem!!! Keep Writing!!!
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