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Aw, nuts!
Didn't find anything distracting whatsoever.
Goodies
I can certainly see where the second half of the name "Oddquain Butterfly" comes from! Very cool.
You've followed all the rules exactly as required. Nice work!
I loved the how visuals were seen both from the inside and the outside of the wall. It really makes one think. Two perspectives. I found this very interesting.
The bold, black font fit nicely, along with all the punctuation. For once, blocky mixed flow works very well in a poem, especially about a wall.
Things to Hoot About! Ignorance to what’s inside
It's easy to ignore what you're not aware of.
Great piece!
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