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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, 🌑 Darleen - QoD ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Squirrel* Aw, nuts!

         *Acorn* Didn't find anything distracting whatsoever. *Smile*


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         *Gingerbread* I can certainly see where the second half of the name "Oddquain Butterfly" comes from! Very cool.
         *Gingerbread* You've followed all the rules exactly as required. Nice work!
         *Gingerbread* I loved the how visuals were seen both from the inside and the outside of the wall. It really makes one think. Two perspectives. I found this very interesting.
         *Gingerbread* The bold, black font fit nicely, along with all the punctuation. For once, blocky mixed flow works very well in a poem, especially about a wall. *Wink*


*Owl* Things to Hoot About!
         Ignorance to what’s inside
         It's easy to ignore what you're not aware of. *Frown*

Great piece!

*Leafbr* Have a great day and...*Leafbr*
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*


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