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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, 🌑 Darleen - QoD ! It's me again! *Laugh* I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . This will complete my 52 entries, 52 reviews, and 16 extra reviews.*Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Squirrel* Nuts!

         *Acorn* You rarely use any punctuation in this awesome piece, so I wonder if you could just omit all of it. It's up to you, of course. Just something to consider plus it would be consistent.


*Fox* Goodies

         *Cookie* I love your poems, Darlene. You are very good at dark poetry, I must say!
         *Cookie* You not only wrote the required one stanza Aquarian in 14 syllables 2/4/6/2, but you wrote four quatrains! You are very ambitious, indeed. *Bigsmile*


*Owl* Things to Hoot About! *Owl*
         Shout out-
         shatter my dreams;
         your vile detestations
         devour
(This is the stanza that you might consider omitting punctuation. I LOVE this stanza! Nice work!)


*Leafbr* Have a great day and...*Leafbr*
*Pumpkin2*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Pumpkin2*

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