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One Busy Night in Chicago  [18+]
1930's Chicago,-- Back Street Private Detective, a Girl and a Gangster
by I might be here, now.
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "One Busy Night in Chicago"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I just read your detective story about a Girl and a Gangster and I think I will read some other stories of Lou Ryan’s .

I like the setting of the story how you described the surroundings. Dialogues flowed beautifully. You described the fight with accurate and believable actions. I liked the range of problems and the way you solved the mystery. Especially the lines “I opened all the pigeon cages and spooked the birds until they flew off the roof making a racket. A nervous Vinny looked up at all those birds flying wildly “.

Great write and so thoughtful!!

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