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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

Lisa, It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like way you put your feelings to Johnny.. The poem expressed your nostalgic feelings. The poet wrote “Johnny I love you the world full and the sky full No one can compare to you you’re so cool”.

I find the lovely romantic thoughts inside the lines..The poem has a nice rhythm with good imaginary. The title, “A Letter To Johnny” fits this poem.

Good write and so beautiful!!

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