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Hi there, Hiker Angel!
For such a short piece, this is pretty dark! I like it! *Smirk2*
I know it's mostly descriptions instead of action, but it's also the feeling you brought to this as you allow yourself to be taken over by this dark demon, and although the ending was a little ambiguous, it still packed quite a punch!
So I'm guessing you made a deal with the demon to trade your gorgeous looks and your evilness with her ugliness and her kindness? Don't get me wrong; I know (I think) what you meant by The Ugliest Beauty, because no matter how beautiful something is, it can still be ugly. Kind of reminds me of that G & R song (even though I hate them!), 'Every Rose Has A Thorn'.
Anyway, great job!
Kee ponw ritin gon, HA! I know you said you'd probably just be stopping by "SCREAMS!!!"  for a little while until you move onto something else, but I'd really like it if you would keep dropping by as much as possible! You have a LOT of talent, my friend, and I wouldn't want to see it wasted!

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