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 Advent  [E]
December, Advent, written for the Writer's Cramp
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier
Review of Advent  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Snow5* Happy December again ridinghood! I am happy to review this piece from 'I Write in 2019." It is a timely prompt from the Cramp *Smile* and is relevant for our winter storm day! LOL

*Snowman*Wow! You have really fulfilled the prompt with song titles for December in a wonderful free style poem. I enjoyed the vivid images reflecting times and events of the season especially the "cosmic ache" and the "ancient tale" references. *Thumbsup*

*Treepine*The tone feels reflective with images that suggest a pulling inward and storytelling around a fire. I like the philosophical vibe that reminds me too of Sagittarius. Ending with a hopeful wish for the world is so inspirational and again reflects the love and peace of yule and Christmas.

*Starstruck* I appreciate the effort of trying to get the titles into a coherent flow and message. I entered into the vision with ease. The tone and longing of the voice was awesome.
Thanks for sharing your unique expressions.

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