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Review #4518112
Viewing a review of:
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond  [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
         Review for entry/chapter: "O Coffee Tree
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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What fun Neva, I followed you at I Write and had to pleasure of reading your O Coffee Tree, smiling all of the way.

I could hear the melody played in the background as I read your piece. You kept the rhythm of the original song and added a very fun twist to it.

Technically, I think you have a typo L5 tell / 'til.

My favorite line "The whole world worships your dark brew"

Thanks for brightening my day. I think I'll now pour myself a cup.

~~Tink

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