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 If I was Afraid of the Dark  [E]
This is what would scare me if I was afraid of the dark
by Detective
Review by Tinker
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Frigid, I don't know how I have missed reviewing your work before here at I Write, but I am now reviewing your, If I Was Afraid of the Dark as my extra and last review for I Write 2019.

Written in tercets with a refrain, the frame fits the content.

The rhythm of the piece is moved forward by the refrain. The poem flows with and easy cadence. I liked the way the refrain alternated from the first line of one tercet to the last line of the next tercet then repeating the pattern in subsequent stanzas.

The word choices were simple and effective. Your meaning clear.

My favorite line is the refrain, it is lyrical.

I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks,

~~Tink

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