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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Season's greetings, Infinite Winterix!
For one of your 1st pieces on here, I though this was really, really good! Especially considering how old you are!
You have a wonderful imagination, not to mention a nice way of telling a story! The idea of feathers moving along with these 'infinite moments' is a pretty unique idea, and in a sense, it really is a good analogy of how our good moments can be so fleeting.
Flawless spelling and grammar (thank you!), and a wonderful concept! It reminds me of how the movie Forrest Gump starts out and ends with that feather floating on the wind.
Kee ponw ritin gon, IW, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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