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Buenos dias again, Infinite Winterix!
This is a little different. Good, but different. I might be wrong, but to me it feels like your comparing this to something else, like an analogy of sorts. Or perhaps comparing to something in life? Or the ocean to the sky? *Headbang*
I think that last line clarifies it, though. I think...
Regardless, it was still enjoyable.
One tiny niggle:
'The end if them all is inevitable' (of)
Otherwise, nice job!
Kee ponw ritin gon, IW, and once again, welcome to WdC, and...!

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