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Review #4519121
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 The Creature  [E]
A short story about a boy and his companion.
by GU35T
Review of The Creature  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Season's greetings, GU35T!
For one of your 1st pieces on here, I thought this was pretty good, and you did a good job of telling it!
I like the idea of this young man having something he feels is more than desirable than the things he doesn't have, or can't have, and what better could that be than a pet! Or in this case, a 'companion' who is always there for him, 'no matter what the weather was or what time of day it was'!
Well done, my friend, but I'm a little confused about the 'button' and the 'rough paper' that crossed his palm. I'm thinking the button might be a the dog's nose (if indeed it IS a dog!), but the paper kind of threw me.
Kee ponw ritin gon, GU35T! Thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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