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Review #4519131
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 Screens  [E]
Screen time and technology
by MatthewMW
Review of Screens  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, MatthewMW!
This is a nice little essay about the advantages of what technology has done for us, both young and old, and I agree with most of what you say.
However, I don't believe that it's brought us closer! Granted we can keep up with each other and 'like' all we want with a just a few taps of our fingers, but people aren't really 'talking' to each other anymore. I'm 54, so I'm not quite 'over the hill' yet, but I miss the days when people, especially relatives, would talk to each other face to face instead of looking at them on a screen! It's not even close to actually being there! Yes, I know they said the internet would bring us closer, but I just don't see it! There's nothing like physically being with someone you truly love!
Nicely done, though! The spelling and grammar was flawless, and you made some very valid points! My only suggestion would be to put this in a larger font to make it easier to read. Not all of us have 20/20 vision!
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