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IT LURKS  [13+]
Beware of strangers bearing curses.
by Vick Rolling 🏳️‍🌈
Review of IT LURKS  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Victor!
This isn't bad. I love me a good werewolf story, and you delivered with this!
I like the idea of this couple being suckered into this stranger's trap so he could (supposedly?) feed his pet/friend, and the fact that the stranger also had green eyes apparently made him a WW as well. I'm guessing that one 'turned' before the other, right?
Great spelling and grammar, but it was that last line that made this shine. At least they'll both have a good dinner tonight! *Smirk2* *Laugh*
Just a darn shame that Michael didn't listen to his wife's warning about not opening the door! *Shock2*
A couple of tiny niggles:
"I thought it was a hungry cat, but then I was its eyes." (saw?)
"All I want to do it go..." (is?)
Otherwise, well done, and nice job with the prompt phrase!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Victor, and I'm glad you managed to enter this today! I hope to see more of entries in the future!

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