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Review #4519502
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Pretty Ugly Words  [18+]
Poetry and prose for contests. The occasional "slider" poem.
by IceSkatingSugarCube
         Review for entry/chapter: "Mushy Love Poem: Lento" 
Review of Pretty Ugly Words  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Christmas tHiNg

What brought tHiNg meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am doing the I Write in 2019 Activity and you posted before me in the forum. It is my pleasure to read and review your work.

What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about my own marriage which is a long time. It is good to feel so positive about those we love more than a decade (or three in my case) of being together.

There is also some humor in this. I think it takes a sense of humor to make a relationship stand the test of time in appreciating that we all change physically as the years creep over us. It is what is inside that counts and that becomes clearer as I age.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the rhyme and the message that is here that one appreciates a romantic love, but also a constant one based in friendship. That's how I took it anyway.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

I enjoyed reading your poem and felt that the rhyme scheme was good. I am no expert, but you got your message across with effective language. Nice work!

I do not engage in hyper critical reviews or editing forays. I enjoyed my reading and I told you why, which is about the size of a review from me these days. Enjoyed my visit! Well done!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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