Hi Amelia,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the Christmas time and the festive atmosphere that exists during it. I love Christmas and look forward to it every year. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here.You have concentrated on one particular image in this poem-the festive feel of Christmas. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.