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 The Magic Needle  [E]
He watched as I took what was already there and, stitch by stitch, a pattern emerged.
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Review of The Magic Needle  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This poem is very unique, I like the rhythm of it and you did a great job with this poem. I just really enjoyed your poem.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

I really like the eighth stanza where the blanket was sewn up and it was able to protect the child lol.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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